original by zero-cross.deviantart.com/ but I didn't like the male inflation, so I edited it so there are only girls in my version. also i recently changed marine's dialogue to fit with her australian accent, i got a traslations for this website --->www.gorgeousity.com/bbf/ as well as change the story a little bit to fit with Marine,Blaze and the others being lesbian couples but tell me if you like it and which change you like because if everyone hates it all the changes then i will change it all back.